Monday, 11 October 2010

jing hongyuan's plan

Title: the aims of academic study and how can they be achieved
Subtitle: master’s aim and the way they achieved
Introduction: this essay will find the aim of a master’s academic study, and how they can be achieved. Across analysis the aim of a Chinese master who study in England, and find his way to achieved. Try to justice motivation is the most important part of achieved.
Main body: In the first part use the example of more and more Chinese student study abroad try to find why this happening?
          In the second part use the search on the internet give the 4 reason about the aims of Chinese master’s study, then give the main reason---for a good job in china.
          In the third part argue the second part give the true reason about a Chinese master, work hard then do more academic research.
          In the forth part give the example of the successful Chinese master BO guagua, and try to find why he can be achieved.
          In the fifth part find the main way to success student’s motivation.
Conclusion: sum up all opining about this essay. Then give the answer about aims of academic study and how can they be achieved.

1 comment:

  1. Good. Need to make some general comments before narrowing the scope. Needs more content, e.g. what is the answer in the conclusion?

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