Introduction: more and more people like to choose the specific academic study. The follows are some aims that I make an in-depth analysis about studying academic study.
body 1:
aim 1: to assure having an ideal career in the future. Many people choose the academic study just for a piece of paper as the competition in society is becoming more and more strong.
aim 2: to gain an achievement in the academic field, such as Nobel prize.
aim 3: to improve personal skills, such as interpersonal relationships, and how to corporate with different people of world society.
body 2: how to achieve these aims
the main way is improve group work skill, because group work can be used to encourage deeper learning, make us more creative by discussions.
conclusion: academic study is important as you can not only gain the achievement of academic knowledge but also personal skills.
Good. Need to connect aims to ways to achieve them.
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