A major shake-up of the welfare system
The news from BBC news shows there will have a major shake-up of the welfare system which may include ending some universal benefits such as child benefit paid for those over the age of 16.For this changes opinions vary ,some people believe that should be put in force because some people should go to work,but others suggest that will lead some problem more than benefits .I think it depends.
Firstly,it will lead ^ some social problems.In many families the universal allowances take a major part of their daily incomes,if this part be curbed,they will under shortage of the basic needs which will fathered some security of society issues.
Secondly,lack finances will hinder some people to further their education.It will make some people feel difficult to afford the daily use of their study life which may let them discontinue their school work.
However,this policy can push able-bodied person ^ go to work,which will save lots of capitals to contribute the country.
To sum up,this policy should be put in force,but at the same time,the government must have some correlation behaviours to avoid the people which surely shortage of money and couldn’t go to work.
This sentence is plagiarised: "a major shake-up of the welfare system which may include ending some universal benefits such as child benefit paid for those over the age of 16" - the remainder contains too many errors.
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