The article which I found it talks about whether the government should ban on smoking in all public places. I think we can get more benefits from banning smoking in public places.
The first reason for my argument is that smoking is very bad for people’s health. It will destroy lung and cause many serious illness such as cancer and Alzheimer ^. Moreover, in public place there are a part of no-smoking people. The smoke also hurt them. This is a crucial thing.
Another important reason is that smoking also makes the environment become badly. Everyone knows if someone smoke in the room, the air will be cloudy and everything may cover by dust. I think no one like working in this room.
So, I would like to draw the conclusion that total ban on smoking in all public is pretty good for everyone. Yet at the same ^ time government should open some smoking room around the public places, so the drawbacks of smoking could be minimized. [Last point is not clear]
Good. Well structured. Some minor errors. What was the article's conclusion and where was it from?
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