1. Introduction: Explain why it is important make sure individual academic study aims clearly and be sure achieved that,introduce some of the academic study aims.
2. Fist paragraph:Make a questionnaire from student about the most important aims of academic study ,compare data and make a conclusion from the questionnaire.
3. Second paragraph:Focus on one aim from the conclusion.Define the
aim and tell why it is more important than others.Connect the background like financial crisis and problem of employment.
4. Third paragraph: How to achieved this aim like understand the knowledge and pay more attention on learning ,explain why the method is good for achieve the aims.
5. Conclusion:conclusion all of the opinions and methods and look into the future.
Good. Needs more content, e.g. what are some of the study aims in the introduction?
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